Here is some feed back from my teacher. This teacher is crazy.

Here is some feed back from my teacher. This teacher is crazy.

Connie Sullivan

Sep 8, 7:17 PM

Your long-term goal needed to be based on your community level, not the HP 2030 goal. Decrease the obesity rate in _____ County, Ohio from the current rate of __% to __% within 1 year. Please rewrite your long-term goal to reflect this change before moving on to week 3, as you will be developing a teaching plan for your goals for your focus group. No need to resubmit this assignment for correction verification, as I will be able to note the change in the next assignment. (-1)

Connie Sullivan

Sep 8, 7:15 PM

You needed to develop your own ST goals and interventions. The short-term goals need to be goals that a community focus group can achieve, not what you achieve. The goals need to be something like: Increase the percentage of residents in the county that report getting the recommended physical activity at least 3x per week by 50% within 6 months. Then, an intervention could be to set up ways to enhance access to places for physical activity in the community, which would increase physical activity and improve physical fitness, which will ultimately lead to helping the community achieved the long-term goal set. Please rewrite your short-term goals to reflect this change before moving on to week 3, as you will be developing a teaching plan for your goals for your focus group. No need to resubmit this assignment for correction verification, as I will be able to note the change in the next assignment. (-3)

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Connie Sullivan

Sep 8, 7:11 PM

Journal names remain capitalized

Connie Sullivan

Sep 8, 7:11 PM

If an article has a doi number, it needs to be listed in the reference per APA format

Connie Sullivan

Sep 8, 7:11 PM

If an article has a doi number, it needs to be listed in the reference per APA format

Connie Sullivan

Sep 8, 7:12 PM

With APA format, the first word of the title is the only capitalized word. Except if there is a colon or dash, then the